Hello, I'm Stephanie, a student and year 6 at PCS in Auckland, NZ.
My class is KHH and my teachers are Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin.
I love learning at this school it's so fun!
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Kia ora Stephanie, I agree with Cruze your cultural dance create was very cool! Nice work thinking outside the square to come up with an original way to express your ideas. As always you have put in an excellent effort with your writing and you understand paragraphing well. Your next goal with writing is to be a critical editor of your own work, this means rereading what you write frequently and out loud. Ask yourself questions when reading your work, like: Have I used this word too often? Have I already said this? I want you to keep growing your ideas with more evidence or explanation. Fantastic maths work this past week, great job keeping up with strategy practise. Awesome week Stephanie!
Your cultural dance create was awesome!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Stephanie, I agree with Cruze your cultural dance create was very cool! Nice work thinking outside the square to come up with an original way to express your ideas. As always you have put in an excellent effort with your writing and you understand paragraphing well. Your next goal with writing is to be a critical editor of your own work, this means rereading what you write frequently and out loud. Ask yourself questions when reading your work, like: Have I used this word too often? Have I already said this? I want you to keep growing your ideas with more evidence or explanation. Fantastic maths work this past week, great job keeping up with strategy practise. Awesome week Stephanie!
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